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I sit

In the dark.

The moon

My only light.



And here,

In my arms.

The cold still flesh.

My latest prey.

The cry

My heart

Should it be

Still beating,

Would be pounding.

The thrill.

The smell

Of his fear.

When I

Showed the truth

Of my identity.



He ran.

I gave chase.

My laugh

Chilling him through.



Life is

A fleeting thing.

Fleeing away,

Like a deer.

Like him.

Here I caught him.

And he fell

To his knees

Before me.

Pleading.

For what?

I asked him.

And he could

Give no answer.



He died,

As I fed.

His last

Breath escaping silently.



His eyes flutter

Suddenly

And a weak groan

Escapes him.

I smile.

He shivers

Under my gaze.

\"Who are you?\"

His voice hoarse.

\"I am you,

you are me.\"

\"What do you mean?\"

\"You are one of us.\"

Silence reigns.
Our eyes meet.



I stroke

his cold cheek

With one finger.

And I leave.

Leave him

To follow,

To wonder,

To fear,

To hope,

Perhaps to dream.



My whisper fades

Into the night,

\"Death is

Only the beginning.\"
©2003-2009 ~dracoprncs1310
:icondracoprncs1310:

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ahm... Embrace writing contest entry. Not much to say about it. I made up the style myself, so very, very freeform. And really disorganized.

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Niiice~! :D (Big Grin)

Your entry has been faved and added to the devpack! Many thanks for joining our contest and good luck! =) (Smile)

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Whoa.....I really like this ^_^ Such beautiful emotion! I envisoned it all the way through. I'm such a sucker for immortal poetry *stares at his notebooks full of unfinished poems* ...O_O heheh! XD
And yes, disorganized is the best kind =D (Big Grin)

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'"You going to break down my door again?"
"Never," I whispered.
"You going to defy me in any way in particular?"
"Never in any way ever."
"Further words?"
"I love you."
"I'm sure."
"But I do," I said sniffling.'
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"To sleep, perchance to dream.."

For some reason this made me think of Hamlet. Very nice free verse style. I really like how you forced the comparison between the victim and his killer. Makes you wonder if the victim will turn into the same type of torturing predator once he finally realizes what he is!

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"The love of beauty is but the soul's remembrance of what it once knew before it was encased in flesh."
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